good! david carson imitation, correct? photo is interesting. script is fine for now. be better if you do it by hand and scan it in. "do for it" font is too fat. though i like the white space relief there. maybe figure another way to introduce white space. david does calculated chaos. try that! your block of black type is the bottom left is way too calm for a david rip off. letter space, or run it off the page, or both. it's too tidy as it is now. but, good. pls catch up. xo g
good! david carson imitation, correct? photo is interesting. script is fine for now. be better if you do it by hand and scan it in. "do for it" font is too fat. though i like the white space relief there. maybe figure another way to introduce white space. david does calculated chaos. try that! your block of black type is the bottom left is way too calm for a david rip off. letter space, or run it off the page, or both. it's too tidy as it is now. but, good. pls catch up. xo g
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